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Garden of Memory

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Silent draperies drown in forbidden gloom;
hidden tales radiate from decaying lace.
Every loose strand of thread
threatening to sway in the wrong direction.
The floor boards creak with the strangest elegance
and alone in the corner does the mohagony table stand.

Choking on the slightest breeze, the nightingale would not agree
with the bitter sentimental notes of the aging rocking chair.
A shattered mirror on the wall, stained with clumpy spots of blood;
segmented glass strewn upon an ancient dressing table.
The yellowing parchment of books
lay torn and tattered upon a dusty bookshelf.

A splintered vase resides within a wincing cupboard,
chartered teacups shiver with the icy wind.
A solitary figure stands aside
composed of simple dress and shoes,
enveloped with memories of before—
a time of iridescent homecomings.
Written on June 23, 2005. Something about this poem made me want to submit it. I really like how it flows. I also want to submit this to a poetry contest. Any suggestions on how I can make this better/should I submit this to the poetry contest?
© 2006 - 2024 seelai
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bananaflavoredlube's avatar
I'm not a critic at heart. XD I'm more of those people who go ... OOOH. AAHHH. SHIIINY.

Soyeah. XD


Oooh. Ahh. Shiiny. n__n

I think it's perfect the way it is but be sure to look for a third opinion.